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Title: Rumors
Author: [livejournal.com profile] keefaq
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: PG
Word count: 952
Missing scenes and tag for 5.07 Whispers
Written for the Season 5 Tagathon at [livejournal.com profile] sga_episodefic

Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] gaffsie for the idea.


Summary: Dusty doesn’t know which of the many rumors she’s heard are true.




The first time Dusty saw the military commander of Atlantis, he appeared to find saluting a waste of his extremely limited stores of energy. His lazy return salute was downright surly, and she couldn’t help but be impressed by a man who could look defiant while saluting a subordinate. His glance darted across and past her as if she were translucent, and he sauntered over to another table and sat down across from someone who had to be Ronon Dex. There was a woman sitting next to Dex, presumably Teyla, which meant the fourth person at their table must be the legendary CSO, Dr. Rodney McKay.

Dusty turned her attention back to Dr. Porter, but when she glanced back at the Colonel’s table a moment later, she found him studying her knowingly. She’d been teasing Alison Porter, who was giggling rather adorably at every outrageous thing she could think of saying. The Colonel saw that she had caught him watching and slowly and deliberately turned his gaze back to his own dinner companions. He clearly wasn’t interested in giving her any grief.

There were so many conflicting rumors about the command staff of Atlantis, and particularly about Colonel Sheppard, that Dusty had given up trying to keep it all straight in her head even before she left earth, deciding, as usual, that she would have to trust her own observations and ignore the gossip mill.

****



The story was that Dr. Beckett, the real Dr. Beckett, had died in the line of duty. There were a ton of rumors about his clone, and everything Dusty had learned at the SGC only added to her confusion.

When in doubt, she always fell back on the same strategy. If you presented yourself as not too bright, people would take you at your word. A few clipped words and a gesture or two was all it took to convince people you didn’t have much going on upstairs. That was something Dusty had learned early in life, and it had served her well over and over again. Even in the Stargate program, where two seconds thought should clue you in that no onewas an idiot, people were always ready to underestimate her.

If Beckett had given Major Teldy an opening, she would have been quick to share her “out here far from home no one gives a damn if I’m a dyke” speech to explain why she’d been eager to relocate to the Pegasus galaxy, but even though Dusty agreed with her, it just wasn’t her style. Better to toss off some nonsense about wanting to kill stuff and let Beckett draw his own, hopefully erroneous, conclusions about her.

Turned out a lot of rumors had more than a little truth in them. The one about Colonel Sheppard being totally fearless and more than a bit reckless with his own life was completely true. She wasn’t sure any of them would have made it back alive otherwise.

****


Atlantis was full of nooks and crannies, and she’d found a nice one after getting back from the team’s disastrous first mission. It was a place where she could sit and relax in solitude, hidden away from everyone. She had dozed off, already accustomed to the constant background sound of the ocean, when she was startled awake by an unusual noise. She peered out of her hiding place. Colonel Sheppard and McKay appeared to be in some sort of scuffle. She tensed for a moment, all the stories about alien possession and replicators who looked just like people running through her mind.

But then the Colonel laughed softly. “Knock it off,” he said, but his tone was teasing, almost indulgent. “I’ve got work to do.”

“Come on. It won’t take me long,” McKay said in the least quiet whisper she’d ever heard. He was laughing, too, and tried unsuccessfully to yank the Colonel along the corridor. Sheppard fell against him with a very un military snort, then suddenly straightened up and shoved McKay against the wall. Dusty tensed, no longer sure what she was seeing, but McKay still looked amused. “Scared of Woolsey?” McKay asked.

“Terrified,” Sheppard answered. He leaned forward and kissed McKay dead on the mouth and Dusty saw McKay’s hands come up to frame Sheppard’s face as she leaned back into her hiding place. This was so not the place to be caught eavesdropping, but there was no way for her to escape now without alerting them to her presence.

“Right here, right now” Sheppard said, his voice thick with lust. His hands went to McKay’s pants and started opening them.

McKay sucked in a loud breath. “John, jesus, John,” His head fell heavily back against the wall as if he would acquiesce, but after a second he seemed to pull himself together and grabbed onto the Colonel, who was halfway to his knees. “John, stop. “ he looked down at the Colonel hungrily. “Look at you,” he said, “You’re so…, god you’re so crazy, get up. This is one of your more brainless ideas.” He hauled the Colonel back to his feet. “Your room is five minutes away. Come on, we can’t do this here, charming though it would be.”

“Right,” the Colonel said, sounding a little vague, but he followed McKay down the corridor readily.

Dusty leaned back in her hiding place to consider what she’d seen. So that was the real Colonel Sheppard. It was one rumor she’d hoped was true. She wondered if she could be as lucky as he was, lucky enough to find someone for herself here, someone who would want to know the real her. She smiled. She already felt more at home than she ever had on earth.

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Date: 2008-09-09 01:25 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lenyia.livejournal.com
Dusty's so great!
Lovely story.

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Date: 2008-09-09 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading.I think Dusty was the best part of the episode.

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Date: 2008-09-09 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] incidental-fire.livejournal.com
Very nice! I liked Dusty's inner monologue, since we really would think that the SGC wouldn't actually send anyone dumb to Atlantis, any episode-writing evidence to the contrary.

The first time Dusty saw the military commander of Atlantis, he appeared to find saluting a waste of his extremely limited stores of energy.
Heh, quintessential John. :)

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Date: 2008-09-09 11:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
I was kind of annoyed that the writers seemed to want us to think she was stupid. Like why would they think we'd like that? It's not like we have a shortage of dumb women on TV.

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Date: 2008-09-09 01:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gaffsie.livejournal.com
Aww, I do hope that Dusty will find someone of her own. :)

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Date: 2008-09-09 11:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
Me too. I forgot to credit you with the idea for this when I first posted it, but I've fixed it. Thanks!

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Date: 2008-09-10 08:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gaffsie.livejournal.com
Wow, thank you. You didn't have to do that. You're the one who managed to write a good story despite the terrible and uninspiring source material, no me. :)

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Date: 2008-09-09 03:47 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] tarlanx
Loved seeing John and Rodney through her eyes!

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Date: 2008-09-09 11:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
Thanks. So glad you liked it. That outsider viewpoint always gets to me, too.

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Date: 2008-09-09 04:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] winter-elf.livejournal.com
Oh yea. Love seeing them through others eyes, and this way was very cool! Neat inner dialogue from Dusty.

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Date: 2008-09-09 11:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
Thanks! It was [livejournal.com profile] gaffsie 's idea to go with an outsider viewpoint. Glad you enjoyed reading it.

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Date: 2008-09-09 05:39 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sobelle.livejournal.com
Not sure how I got here? but I like your Dusty's POV story... and yeah... Even in the Stargate program, where two seconds thought should clue you in that no one was an idiot, people were always ready to underestimate her.

Word!

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Date: 2008-09-09 11:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
Not sure how you got here, either, but welcome! and thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I wish the writers would agree that only the best and brightest would be posted to another galaxy.

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Date: 2008-09-09 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cookiemom6067.livejournal.com
this made me smile - Dusty Mehra was the only good thing in that episode.

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Date: 2008-09-09 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
Thanks. yeah, I thought the episode sucked.

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Date: 2008-09-09 07:08 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] velocitygrass.livejournal.com
Very nice! I found Dusty to be a rather stereotypical marine, but you've shown me a different side here. Love the last sentence.

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Date: 2008-09-09 11:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
She was stereotypical, wasn't she? Ugh. glad you liked the story.

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Date: 2008-09-09 07:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kathgrr.livejournal.com
that was a nice tag to a pretty dismal episode =)

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Date: 2008-09-09 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
I was too bored with the episode to bother working up any outrage at how bad it was. Thanks for the comment.

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Date: 2008-09-09 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fanarts-series.livejournal.com
i love rusty, she's cool and she saw the true love, it's so vute.

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Date: 2008-09-09 11:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you, I like her too.

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Date: 2008-09-09 10:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Great story, thanks.

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Date: 2008-09-09 11:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
:)
Thanks for reading. I'm so glad you liked it.

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Date: 2008-09-10 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sasha-feather.livejournal.com
Cute story! I love outsider viewpoint/voyeur fics. :D

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Date: 2008-09-10 12:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
Thanks. I love them, too.

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Date: 2008-09-11 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] psyko-kittie.livejournal.com
Oh. I loved this. Dusty was my fav!

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Date: 2008-09-11 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
Thanks. Dusty was the bright spot of the episode in my opinion.

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Date: 2008-09-14 01:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darsynia.livejournal.com
I really loved this! She strikes me as very much an observer--which made the teasing moments she shared with her team even more precious in my eyes, because she's comfortable with them, and it shows--and in this, she reveals next to nothing about herself, even in her own musings, which really is a neat characterization choice, I like it. I absolutely LOVE stories where someone eavesdrops (by accident or on purpose) on McShep in-progress, so I thank you kindly for writing this!

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Date: 2008-09-14 01:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
Thanks so much for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed reading. I do like Dusty a lot, and hope we see her again, but my McShep obsession always tries to worm its way into everything I write.

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Date: 2008-10-06 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragojustine.livejournal.com
Random note: I thought I had you friended, then I didn't. I'm always doing that. So I'm late on this.

But! I adore outsider perspectives. And I adore Dusty, and I love the way you write her as very consciously angling to be underestimated- I definetely got that from the episode.

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Date: 2008-10-08 12:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keefaq.livejournal.com
I don't know what the writers intended for Dusty, but I like to think there was more than what seemed to be happening on the surface. No worries on the friending thing, I'm not that sensitive.

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