Thanks. Zelempa took the Wraith/John story and very politely pointed out what was wrong with it. While I'm rewriting, I figured I better rework and other one, too, which is even more problematical, since it seems silly to give it over to you without fixing problems I can see. If I can get it into better shape I'd be grateful if you'd look it over.
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Date: 2008-01-30 12:28 pm (UTC)