Since I was MIA this weekend and missed out on the beta, here's a bit of running commentary.
“That you’re doing McKay? Some, I guess. Why?” Hee!
“I think about them, too,” he said instead. LOL. Poor John. At least his mouth knows what's going on, even if his brain doesn't.
He felt like he couldn't stand it, couldn't give up what had never existed outside his own imagination. Oh! Oh. That's so...oh John.
which earned him the stubborn little chin tilt. God, I love that chin tilt. It's the essence of McKay.
And finally...Rodney face crumpled. “Don’t do this to me,” he said. “I just broke up with my girlfriend for you.”
And just that quickly, John found the glare sliding off his face. He was feeling a little bit, no, a whole lot better. “You what?”
“I broke up with Katie, you moron. What was all that talk about blowjobs for anyway? Was that a joke?”
“No, Rodney, no, it wasn’t a joke.” He was off the bed and impulsively pulling Rodney into him before he’d finished speaking. AWW. And EEE! And so much ♥
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Date: 2007-12-11 05:18 am (UTC)“That you’re doing McKay? Some, I guess. Why?” Hee!
“I think about them, too,” he said instead. LOL. Poor John. At least his mouth knows what's going on, even if his brain doesn't.
He felt like he couldn't stand it, couldn't give up what had never existed outside his own imagination. Oh! Oh. That's so...oh John.
which earned him the stubborn little chin tilt. God, I love that chin tilt. It's the essence of McKay.
And finally...Rodney face crumpled. “Don’t do this to me,” he said. “I just broke up with my girlfriend for you.”
And just that quickly, John found the glare sliding off his face. He was feeling a little bit, no, a whole lot better. “You what?”
“I broke up with Katie, you moron. What was all that talk about blowjobs for anyway? Was that a joke?”
“No, Rodney, no, it wasn’t a joke.” He was off the bed and impulsively pulling Rodney into him before he’d finished speaking. AWW. And EEE! And so much ♥
Really enjoyed this! Well done.