I really LOVED this story - so strange, so well-written. Your focus on John's feelings (the obsession and the revulsion) was wonderful, and you did a wonderful job of writing John and Rodney like feeling human beings instead of sex dolls.

I agree with you about Katie - never could see WHY Rodney would go for such a "sweet little thing," nor why Katie would go for him. The only decent scene up until their last scene in Quarrantine was in Sunday - the "there's not a lot of subtext with you" scene.

I lost your story once, now I'm definitely "memorizing" it.

Thanks again for sharing it with us.